Core77

[Jay_Johl]

Hi Core 77 Forum users

I designed the Alkemista Alcohol Infusion Vessel for my client, the product made $107k+ on Kickstarter

The design case study's web page framework is complete before I get my developer to code the page I believe it is necessary to obtain as much constructive criticism and honest feedback before investing in the page.

Thank you

-Jay Johl

[John_Mauriello]

This is an excellent exhibition of process and the product is cool. The graphic design needs a lot of work, though. Right now the fonts and spacing just aren't working. Maybe go on behance and look at some graphic designers' layouts for inspiration.

also i think this belongs in "portfolios"

[Jay_Johl]

Thanks John for the feedback.
I'll improve my UI/UX as much as I can.
Thanks for the appreciation in the work

Mods move to "portfolios"

[yo]

I think that link is not a good way to get feedback.

[Jay_Johl]

I think that link is not a good way to get feedback.

Hey 'Yo'

Great talk at the 2014 Core77.com object culture conference.
"I want to draw stuff from the future" that's a great phrase and quote for designers!

If you have any ideas on ways I should share my case study page to receive feedback and criticism it would be much appreciated

Thanks again.

-Jay

[yo]

Jay,

Thanks for coming to the talk. It was a un one to give.

I'd post the work directly into the forum like this poster did. Notice the amount of feedback:
viewtopic.php?f=20&t=37060