This is for our t-shirts and program books that will be utilized at our upcoming pageant. Feedback welcomed!
BJ:
Not sure if you’re joking or not: your wording indicates that it is a done deal.
To be blunt: this is so elementally, fundamentally, flawed, wrong, and misdirected (starting with the event itself): is that even the GR skyline? I don’t think they have an Empire State Building. The tiara: gosh, where to start . . . equating women to princesses as a model for success and others to emulate: groan (see “event” above) . … floating above the skyline, a flying saucer, no connection in form, hue, finish, proportion or position to anything else . . . the choice of typeface: one that is almost universally mocked for its overuse, its hackneyed, awful, skumorphic strokes and forms . . . .
Hire a designer, maybe?