'GGLEE7' - Industrial Design Portfolio Website

gglee7 · September 22, 2017, 6:53am

ralphzoontjens:

Hi,

The positive is that your designs are fairly well developed and visualized.
They stem from problem solving type design thinking and that is fine if done in a complex environment with many requirements from various aspects of an organization (business strategy, technology implementation, ergonomics, federal regulations, user acceptance, brand identity). However, you hardly show any story behind the product let alone describe how you went from requirements to an implementation. See if you can present your work less like a black box and by showing more engagement with the design process make it more engaging for the viewer of your websites as well.

The website design works but can use some more work in terms of layout and typography. And yes, ditch the music - even music professionals should not have music like that on their website. Cool for Flash websites anno 2000, now a design crime.

Thank you for your advice. I think so too.
Currently I am working on the homepage correction. I also removed music from my homepage.
I will make a better homepage according to your advice.
Thank you.

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