Nice portfolio David!
Personally I think it’s a too long, maybe at some point whoever is looking at it would scroll down faster. I guess you will be sending over a shorter PDF version when you start applying.
There are 2 things I believe would help making the projects more eye catchy:
- Refined 2D renderings (e.g. page 8, Popper sketches). It shouldn’t take too long to improve the reflections, highlights and shadows.
- Improved renderings (Harley camera and Walkman), show the display on with a menu, write the typical lens info and show the lens reflection. You can easily find these details on google and PS them on, it really improves the overall outcome.
I’d just show the input they gave you (if this is possible) and then show the final result explaining what was your role on the development. From the original sketch to the final product there is a lot of work, including design refinement, design for manufacturing, CMF definition, prototyping, etc.
