I'm currently in my third year at the Academy of Art's ID program and would like to begin a thread to get feedback on my portfolio. These boards have been a huge help to me, and after seeing many students get great feedback I'd like to hold myself accountable to improving my portfolio consistently by creating this thread.
Being that I have improved so much in a short period of time it has been daunting to continuously update projects so they don't look out of place. With that being said I'd like to share the five projects I am able to show in hopes that you guys can point out holes and places for me to improve.
January 2014- 1 week - Marching band shoe: https://www.behance.net/gallery/1578205 ... -Band-Shoe


February 2014 - 2 weeks - Pensole, Search and Rescue Boot: https://www.behance.net/gallery/1578178 ... escue-Boot



March 2014 - 1 week - Oil Rigging Boot: https://www.behance.net/gallery/1578215 ... gging-Boot


February - May 2014 - 15 weeks - Shopping System: https://www.behance.net/gallery/2333844 ... -in-Cities





I really like this project, I think it has the most potential but I'm really struggling to explain the complexities that I intended..
September - December 2014 - 15 weeks - Music Education System: https://www.behance.net/gallery/2333819 ... -Education








There's definitely a better way to present my design intentions and the final cad model isn't doing the project justice
My big question is this:
Based on what you see, where do you think I should put in my time to improve my work? Should I go back and revisit old shoe projects? Or focus on polishing my 15 week projects? Or create entirely new personal projects?
Thank you for your time!
Aaron