Hello!
About a month ago I posted a portfolio draft. I took the critiques and finished a portfolio. I cleaned it up a lot from what it was. Making it much simpler, including less graphical elements, reducing text, and trying to concentrate on the products themselves. I love getting other’s opinions because I think it makes my work just that much stronger. So, I would like some constructive criticism from the Core77 community.
I also have a few concerns:
- Is it not consistent enough?
I have applied different colors to the backgrounds to ‘spice it up’ and make certain things ‘pop’. I’m not sure if this messes with the flow of the projects. Can you see a distinct gap between them? - Simply too simple?
I eliminated the graphic elements that were overtaking my pages and causing confusion when looking at my pages and brought it down to the bare minimum. Now i’m worried that there is too little. - Length
As suggested, each spread recognizes a certain element of the project as to keep all ideas separate and not put out too much information at once.
please keep in mind the size of each page is an 8x8 square (spreads 16x8) - I have included projects from my past internship in a different way…
Is this effective… or even… is it allowed?
Thank you all very much I look forward to hearing your critiques!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8nBazVRdv-AUTQ2QjNSWEpDczg/view?usp=sharing