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Shawn_95 · March 24, 2015, 10:18am

Robbie_roy:

Great improvement Shawn! I see a lot of new work from the older Issuu that you posted and a much nicer presentation. Do you mean Masters or transfer to another school? It says you are in your current school from 2012-present.

Some things:

The Doub headphones could definitely use some process and setup. I’m sure you had some different ideas and then came to the current detachable bluetooth headphones idea – what were these ideas? Who / what market is it for?

On the headphones and Tochi torch, I think the “color options” coauld be condensed to one page. They are good to see but aren’t worth almost half of the slides.

Like the headphones, it would help to show that you explored more before CADing the bike. This is even more so with bikes, since so much of transportation is 2D exploration before 3D. I liked how you did it with the SecondSkin prosthetic – organizing your work into 3 concept paths (and it can help to highlight which path you took and why) – that approach would work well for the other projects also.

The sketches and 3d renderings in your “sketch” section are weaker than the actual projects. I am guessing you did these before the rest. I think a separate section can be nice, but not if it is dragging the rest down. I also wanted to see what the thumbnail for that category was, but the actual sketch wasn’t in there!

Some models would be great. I am not a big model-maker so I understand that you are focusing on other things, and you want to show what you want to get hired for. However, some foam / cardboard / foamcore works-like models (not finished appearance models) could help validate a lot of these projects. Tochi would not be hard to do with some cardboard pipes!

I mainly looked at the Behance, but the “reveal” function on Wix is dangerous! What if someone glosses over that small text and thinks that you only have 3 images per project?

Good luck!

Hi and thanks for your feedback, will improve on them like from your suggestion. I am currrently taking a diploma programme and thus I am trying to apply for a degree. Really appreciate your feedback and thanks!

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