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Project Spread - Luminnaire

Postby kingwilliam9 » March 3rd, 2014, 10:19 am


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Hey everyone,

I am a 3rd year student at Auburn University looking for internship positions this summer and fall and thought this would be a great way to get some feedback on my portfolio spreads. Any kind of feedback is appreciated. I recently posted my first spread and will have the other spreads posted up soon for feedback as well. The layout is modeled after a 8.5"x11" magazine spread.

Link: http://bit.ly/1f0a9Aq

William King
INDD Student Auburn University

Re: Project Spread - Luminnaire

Postby yo » April 16th, 2014, 11:33 am

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Looks good William.

If you wanted to make it stronger I would show 3 CAD iterations, down selecting to a final.

Also show a few more environmental lifestyle renders. Bed side for example.


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