The crib idea is awesome !
As I just read that you had NDA, and hence cannot show the research pictures. Why not to show some competitor mapping, or product mapping and where would you place yours. This you can build it quick, and this will also help to know whats the price of the product you are working with.
As a suggestion the 4 cots in different colour is not impactful, if you had placed variety and if you want to show the colour, then why not add all the four in the space of one image.
In both your Finalization page, Please show some other views/angles/usage of the cot. Its less interesting to see it because all of them have the same view and showing nothing more than the colour. Starting from the cover page to analysis and even the final money shot ! This shows lazyness. This technique can be represented in many ways. Why not put the cots one behind another to show depth of field/perspective. Add some creativity to this ! Its even fast to model and render in the real environment or use your mockup in the parents room !
Overall good work. Just dont repeat the same image/render again and again as done in the bycycle project. If needed then change the colour in Photoshop or change the angle of render and try to compose your sketch page to make it pop out !
goodluck !