Ask inputs for personal online portfolio

Postby Fitorio » February 16th, 2013, 5:31 am


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Hei all

I just finished built up my portfolio and since I know that there are many talented people in this forum, it would be great if you can give me some advices and inputs.

http://www.fitorioleksono.tk


Thanks in advance and have a nice day
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Re: Ask inputs for personal online portfolio

Postby Eddie L » February 16th, 2013, 3:59 pm

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I gave it a quick once-through, first impressions below:

1. Your work is very iconic and simple, the projects are communicated fairly easily.
2. Depending on where you're applying, you really need to sit down with an English speaker and edit the wording. If you were sending that to American companies, the various spelling and grammatical errors would distract from the quality of your work. Take an hour or two and find a friend who is a strong writer (in whatever language you're applying for)—it'll make a huge difference in how your work is conveyed.

Good luck,
Eddie

Re: Ask inputs for personal online portfolio

Postby Fitorio » March 2nd, 2013, 7:30 am


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Thanks Eddie, that is one of my weak point
I will work on it :)
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