What is the purpose of the portfolio?
Is it for grad school or for work?
I personally find it a bit heavy on text and a little to chaotic in images and illustrations.
It would probably benefit from being a little bit lighter. Maybe throw in a quick project that communicates faster and grabs attention more easily. Just a clever idea with a clever solution. Because it seems like there are only 2 projects? Cominco and black collar, right?
You put a lot of work into your projects, no doubt but it is hard for me to grasp all of that within the 30 sec you have to convince an employer. Seriously, nobody is going to read all of that.
Technically, from what I have seen, it looks ok just really confusing. For me it was hard to see where one project ended and another started. The GE one is all over the place.
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bepster on Sun Oct 25, 2009 2:50 pm, edited 1 time in total.